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This is my version of Pepper (Artgerm's OC), done for the (mini) Pepper Project. Since I love Shoujo high school mangas, I decided to go for the high school girl look for Pepper :D She's currently on her way to art class, hence the canvas she's holding.

I know she's supposed to have double D boobies, but they would just look weird in her hoodie. (And I assume they haven't been that big when she was younger...?)

Anyway, hope you like this version of Pepper :)
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:iconeye-x-catcher:
uhm zum Aussehen:

Die Persp. der Augenbrauen ist Falsch genauso wie bei der Iris der Augen das lässt das ganze Bild schwächeln, obwohl die Munspartie gut geworden ist und der Rest vom Körper her wirklich stimmig aussieht

HG passt von den Farben her gut und ich mag dieses Floralmusterganz gerne :) ich finds auch gut das du die Farben aus dem HG mit den Hauptmotiv kombiniert hast das gibt eiin gutes stimmiges Bild ab

Originalität:
ui das war schwer weil du hier so von deinem bisherigen Stil weg bist hab ich deinen Stil nicht sofort erkannt, deshalb ist bei mir schon mal ein Stern weggefallen, weil ich den Wiedererkennungswert als ziemlich wichtig empfinde

ö_Ö uhm ich schätze es das su durch die Armbewegung und das Halten der Mappen etwas Bewegung reinbekommen hast und die im HG wegdriftenden Farben drücken den Eindruck auch noch nach oben.

Technik:
ist steh auf das Bunt XD aber ich erkenn keine klare Lichtquelle.

was ich gut finde ist das man teilweise die Strichführung erkennen kann das gibt deinem Stil etwas lebendiges.

Eindruck:
ich denke du bist schon auf einem hohen Level. Farbtechnisch ists ein tolles Zusammenspiel
was mir aber öffter bei dir auffällt ist das bei dir wissen im Muskelaufbau fehlt. Du nimmst die Rundungen im Gesicht intuitiv mit und übersiehst wo augenhöhlen und co beginnen. Ahnlich ists bei der Colo der Hände

Fazit:
O_O ich würde dir Raten mal ein paar Studien von Schädeln zu machen und zu gucken wie die Muskeln drauf liegen dann dürftest ziemlich schnell einen Effekt an deinen Zeichnungen sehen
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Farben und Anatomie zeigen hier sehr viel Können, genauso wie das wahnsinnig subtile Lineart - auf sowas stehe ich. Mir gefällt vor allem, wie du trotz vieler kühler Farben insgesamt eine recht warme Atmosphäre im Bild erschaffen hast, zum Teil auch durch die trotz des ruhigen Standes dynamische Pose und das ausdrucksvolle Lächeln.

Allerdings kannst du, was die Perspektive des Kopfes und Gesichtes angeht, noch einen drauflegen. Die Brauen wirken zu stark nach oben gebogen, die Nase etwas zu lang - wahrscheinlich würde sie besser aussehen, wenn sie kürzer wäre, und du die ganze Augenpartie mit ihre zusammen leicht runter rücken würdest. Ich hab dazu mal in meiner eigenen Ressourcensammlung gekramt - das hier hilft dir bestimmt weiter: [link] :3

Womit du auch aufpassen musst, ist die Helligkeit der Nasenbrücke. Zum Einen hast du hier scheinbar hauptsächlich mit Weiß gearbeitet, was die Hautfarbe sehr ins Anorganisch-Kühle zieht, zum Anderen sehen die Stellen, wo hell und dunkel aneinandergrenzen, dort etwas extrem aus. Vielleicht kannst du mal ein wenig mit Gelb als Highlightfarbe spielen. Generell wirken extrem satte, strahlende Farben auch von Natur aus heller als ihre Gegenstücke aus anderen Plätzen der Palette, vielleicht ist es also damit auch schon getan.

Die Art wie du aber Lippen, Kleidung und Haar darstellst ist dir wahnsinnig gut gelungen, und ich liebe deine Detailverliebtheit im gesamten Bild. Es wirkt angenehm klar und harmonisch, und sehr, sehr ausdrucksvoll. Ich mag mich zwar ewig an den Makeln aufgehangen haben, aber sie sind eigentlich nur Kleinigkeiten, die nichts daran ändern, wie schnell dieses Bild zurecht auf meine Favoritenliste wandern wird.<3
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:iconmizdawesome:
MizDawesome Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how you drew the hoodie! I always have trouble with those ^^;
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:iconsaya-chan98:
Saya-chan98 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this *^*
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:iconliieszz:
Liieszz Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student General Artist
The coloring is pretty : )
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:icontintacity:
tintacity Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
what an eye candy! the colors look really lovely!
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:icontishawish:
Tishawish Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
I think you did a great job with this! Good call on not making her boobies too large(Artgerm does that quite a bit:XD:). Really lovely colour choices as well:)
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:iconalexadi95:
alexadi95 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well done
the colors are very lively
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:iconnokiramaila:
Nokiramaila Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful, I like her attitude, it's full of life.
And the colors you used are incredible.
Love <3
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:iconalannaharpsong:
AlannaHarpsong Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like how the shading on the hoodie and hair turned out. A nice perspective of her looking down. ^^
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:iconloveableeve:
loveableeve Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful composition! i love the colours used here!
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:iconartofprincessm:
ArtofPrincessM Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
the colors are wonderful. I really love the lighting and how the colors look very beautiful together
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:icontoyona:
Toyona Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
lovely colors~
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:iconask-sindreandsvetki:
Ask-SindreAndSvetki Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
((I love how you coloured and your style is great! How do you draw clothing like that?))
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:iconericajo:
ericajo Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Your coloring's fantastic :love:
The perspective helps a lot too
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:iconwhispywizbee:
whispywizbee Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful colors!
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:iconviobear:
viobear Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is very sexy mashed with adorable. I'd love to accidentally bump into her in person. Love this illustration :D
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:iconyenni-vu:
Yenni-Vu Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful coloring technique!^^
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:iconblazi76:
blazi76 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
colours work really magically here. very positive illustration :)
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:iconandroid-sheep:
Android-Sheep Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ilove how bright and cheery this is, it has really nice atmosphere to it! The colors are very fitting and beautiful, plus I love those white dots they remind me of sparkely star dust or something liek that ^^
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:iconwhiterabbitart:
whiterabbitart Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Wonderful use of color and great illustration!
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:iconmoonrisepower:
Moonrisepower Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful! I love the vibrant colors.
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:iconvisaga:
visaga Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the perspective and the colors! The white specks give a very nice glow :)
lol I think the boobies are fine xD
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad you like the white specks xD Some ppl think they're snow or are complaining why there's dust on the drawing XD But I just think they make the drawing look much more interesting :)
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:iconvisaga:
visaga Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh lol xD Yeah, it makes the drawing a lot more beautiful :)
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:iconthecures:
TheCures Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
wonderful hair and colours
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks 8)
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:iconanpati92:
anpati92 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
I like it so much how colors feel so warm, it's lovely
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you, glad you like it :)
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:iconanpati92:
anpati92 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
it's ok ^^
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:iconunfinishedtears:
unfinishedtears Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Those colors are wonderful! I really love the background too! :)
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :)
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:iconnightmareinspections:
NightmareInspections Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Really gorgeous, I love the colours in it~ ^^
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconorigami-mimi:
origami-mimi Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
oooh I really like the colors in this. Especially the the ways the blues and purples and reds compliment each others. And your linework is really well done too. It's a very active and exciting piece!
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :)
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:iconbri-cx:
Bri-Cx Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional Writer
I love the shading!
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconkayzeex:
Kayzeex Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student General Artist
I think this is my favourite pepper so far :)
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Woah, really?? Thank you so much! ;_;
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:iconyenni-vu:
Yenni-Vu Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really beautiful!^^
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! >_<
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:iconsardae:
Sardae Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the colors! :D
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! ;_;
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:iconmonaolivia:
monaolivia Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
beautiful colors !(:
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconsilvervulpine:
SilverVulpine Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful work. :love:
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot :)
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:iconsilvervulpine:
SilverVulpine Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome. :)
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:icondarezgz:
darezgz Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, beauty colors!
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:iconyinamon:
Yinamon Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thaaank you!
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masaothedog Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012   Traditional Artist
The colours are great!
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